Assignment 8 : Gear Change Assignment from randolfd on Vimeo.
Critique:
- Watch for the rotation of the hip. Adjust this to create a better line of action within the character's spine.
- Get more of sway in the spine by animating the root, and having the rest of the body overlap, followed by head sway and arms.
- Get more of the "jacked up" in the main keyposes and do not don distort the figure too much.
Observations / Things to watch out for from the rest of the class:
- When animating overlap, animate the spine, head then arms. Hide these layers so can focus on each individually.
- When animating emotion, make sure we see the character realize the event..pause...then have the charater react.
- Watch for twinning in poses.
- Add moving holds. In poses where there could be a definite pause, other parts of the body should move as well.
- Add more anticipation.
- Make sure silhouettes are readable.
- Animate the scene for emotion, not just movement.
- The hardest task is to simplify the action to its essential elements. Animating a 22 second animation in a week will make for a weak animated piece.
- The character is always looking for or thinking of something.
No comments:
Post a Comment